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Whispers in the dark by ~Prince-Poison:iconPrince-Poison:



"Give up"
"Death"
"Lies"
"Not good enough"
"Hate"
"Stop trying"
"Pain"
Those are the whispers.
The whispers in the dark.
They are always there.
Following him,
where ever he goes.
Tears him a little more,
Every time.
When he hopes,
wants,
loves,
hurts,
kills.
No matter what.
He can never escape.
They are there, hiding in the darkness.
To hurt him, to punish him.
He's broken, hurt.
But they will never care.
They will just continue,
To never cease that horrible taunting.
"Give up"
"Death"
"Lies"
"Not good enough"
"Hate"
"Stop trying"
"Pain"
It will go one forever.
Until he has had enough.
Until he is ready to take action.
To finally leave this world.
And that time is getting nearer and nearer.
©2007-2009 ~Prince-Poison
:iconprince-poison:

Author's Comments

Also inspired by a song.

Whispers in the Dark, by: Skillet.

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:iconjollymolly:
i love it but the ends kinda week could be better i just expected more with such a strong start but its still good

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If it dosent kill you it will hurt so bad youll wish you were dead
:iconemoheartsmend:
i like it. my sister has the skillet cd that has whispers in the dark on it.

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rainbow shirt ribbed
in acid love
and our lives are ribbed
in plastic love
:iconprince-poison:
Yeah, I know. But I couldn't thin of anything else. I'll think it over.
:iconjollymolly:
well it was still good you just exspect something more like a big finish ya know when you read it do you get what i am saying but if you find the words and belive me there there you gotta look for them but when ya find them it will be wow ya know

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If it dosent kill you it will hurt so bad youll wish you were dead
:iconjollymolly:
your welcome

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If it dosent kill you it will hurt so bad youll wish you were dead

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