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All Deviations
All Deviations


Fighting, losing,
dying.
You feel the world falling around you.
Everyone gangs up to bring you down.
Crying, feeling weak.
Not knowing,
how amazing you are.
Strength radiating from every pore.
Brilliance flowing in every word.
Beauty glowing around you.
Everyone sees it.
But you are blind.
Blind to the wonders you bring to life.
Blind to the smile you put on their faces.
Blind to just how much life would dim without you.
Pain has clouded your vision.
Making you think,
we would be fine without you.
But in reality,
we couldn't possibly survive.
Pull through,
remember the pain eventually fade.
But any scar you allow to form,
will last forever.
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For a friend who is upset.
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~angelsins:iconangelsins: Jan 21, 2008, 8:18:50 PM
*Pore not pour

Its beautiful, I love it.
You should publish your stuff and sell it.

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98% of teens have tried breathing oxygen, if you are one of the 2% who hasn't, paste this in ur sig.

98% of the population claims to have brought sexy back, if you are one of the 2% who sexy never left, put this into your siggy.
~AestheticParadise:iconAestheticParadise: Jan 21, 2008, 10:15:38 PM
I concur with ~angelsins. I think it would be cool to hear you read the poem at a poetry night. :D

I love the honesty of your poem.

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Smiling is a symptom of happiness and can be faked. Don't assume that everybody who smiles is happy.

Never trade a favor for a favor when you can stoup to blackmail. - BJ, M*A*S*H
~Prince-Poison:iconPrince-Poison: Jan 22, 2008, 9:06:55 PM
My spelling sucks, I admit it! XD

And I'm not sure it is that good. But thanks for saying that. You just made my day, well whats left of it ^_^

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"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb"
"What a stupid lamb"
"What a sick masochistic lion"
~Prince-Poison:iconPrince-Poison: Jan 22, 2008, 9:07:55 PM
Thanks so much. We will see.

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"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb"
"What a stupid lamb"
"What a sick masochistic lion"
~angelsins:iconangelsins: Jan 23, 2008, 1:06:40 PM
No problem xD

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98% of teens have tried breathing oxygen, if you are one of the 2% who hasn't, paste this in ur sig.

98% of the population claims to have brought sexy back, if you are one of the 2% who sexy never left, put this into your siggy.
~jollymolly:iconjollymolly: Jan 29, 2008, 5:50:03 PM
who is this about???

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If it dosent kill you it will hurt so bad youll wish you were dead
~Prince-Poison:iconPrince-Poison: Feb 4, 2008, 1:53:48 PM
Michelle.

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"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb"
"What a stupid lamb"
"What a sick masochistic lion"
~EMOheartsMend:iconEMOheartsMend: Feb 23, 2008, 11:52:46 PM
hey...read this poem....from me to you

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In the first year George Washington flew over with Norah Jones and Sissy Spacek. Then Sissy drew George's picture and that was the Mona Lisa.
~xMeggymoo08x:iconxMeggymoo08x: Aug 7, 2008, 10:51:30 AM
I like it more than these people do I think it is so nice