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All Deviations
All Deviations

Tired of being a mother. by ~Prince-Poison:iconPrince-Poison:



Hiding in the shadows,
Veiling your intentions,
Disguising your wickedness.
You ignore me when no ones around,
but act your part,
in front of watchful eyes.
Your slowly pushing me away,
out of your life,
away from you forever.
Hurting me until I won't come back for more.
Beating the will to save you out of me.
Your beyond saving.
I realize that now.
All of the neglect,
the pain,
had one purpose.
To keep me away.
I guess you really are tired of being a mother.
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Done for this weeks theme "Shadows of Neglect" For the club :iconrawem0tion:
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~SesshysRose:iconSesshysRose: Feb 7, 2008, 9:56:17 AM
You sound like you need a big, fat HUG!!! :hug:

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Each word equates a drop of blood
Each sentence drains a vein
Each stanza speeds my beating heart
Each couplet fends off the pain

~SesshysRose
~Prince-Poison:iconPrince-Poison: Feb 15, 2008, 9:51:43 PM
I could probably use one.

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"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb"
"What a stupid lamb"
"What a sick masochistic lion"
~SesshysRose:iconSesshysRose: Feb 15, 2008, 11:19:24 PM
:hug::hug:

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Each word equates a drop of blood
Each sentence drains a vein
Each stanza speeds my beating heart
Each couplet fends off the pain

~SesshysRose
~EMOheartsMend:iconEMOheartsMend: Feb 23, 2008, 11:35:52 PM
luvies you Michael
:glomp:

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In the first year George Washington flew over with Norah Jones and Sissy Spacek. Then Sissy drew George's picture and that was the Mona Lisa.
~Int3stineNo0se:iconInt3stineNo0se: Mar 19, 2008, 10:31:28 AM
Wow, this is pretty intense, and that last line is really powerful.

Though, as a crazy grammar fanatic, I have to point out that in the line "Your beyond saving", you put "your" rather than "you're".
~Prince-Poison:iconPrince-Poison: Apr 2, 2008, 9:03:32 AM
I always do that.... I really need to work on my grammar XD

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"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb"
"What a stupid lamb"
"What a sick masochistic lion"
~Prince-Poison:iconPrince-Poison: Apr 2, 2008, 9:17:22 AM
XD :hug:

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"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb"
"What a stupid lamb"
"What a sick masochistic lion"